Improvements on Shots

This has been improved by putting Duke
on the right side; there are leading diagonal
lines of the car park, and the cars on the left
keep the farm balanced

This is the Original first shot; Problems with

it are that  Duke is too central, there is a bin in
the background and there is too much empty
space.

This shot has many problem. The most
obvious is that you can see some students
with filming equipment on the right. Also
both charters are on the left of the frame
which means it isn't balanced.

This shot has been significantly improved;
Dan is on the left near the bikes, the leading
lines of the college building keep him separate
from the right side of the frame and the light is
kept on him rather than the right side.

This shot is more central, there is nice
background light, both hands are even
and the leading lines of the road help
to show the centre of the frame.

The handshake shot has no interesting
background. The amount of hand shown
isn't even, and it needs to be central.

We decided to change this shot, and
just have Duke walking past the
refectory. It is more interesting, as the
leading lines are definitive, it gives
an interest to the scenery and the lens
flare is interesting.

This shot is very bad. The characters
are far away which means that focus
is on everything else. They are too
close together which means they have
no space to move, and you can see
there camera equipment.

This has been improved as there are
diagonals, the background is more
interesting and the characters are shown
at an angle.

This is the shot of Duke and Katie
looking at each other; This is wrong
as it is is too central, there is a car that
blocks the characters and the focus isn't
on the characters.