Hero - Duke Hayes, a 17 year old English born boy. Duke has incredibly dangerous powers; he has the power to kill at will, just by thinking about it, he has telekinesis so strong, that he can change the position of the moon, he can recall the darkest memories of anyone he desires until they go mad, and worst of all, he has the ability to connect with, and contact the dead.
Situation - The year is 2487. Duke is being held at a secure research facility in Germany, as his powers needed to be studied, and he needed to be kept under lockdown, for the safety of mankind. He speaks fluent English, German, Spanish, French and Russian. He has been trained in the arts of Kung Fu, and Tae Kwon Do from the age of five. He is the deadliest human being to ever have existed in history.
Goal - Dukes main goal is to earn respect from the bullies at the college, so that they will leave him alone. He also wants to get the girl of his dreams, and prove that he is more than just a killing machine.
Conflict - Dorian begins to start killing innocent people at the college, and Duke finds out about his powers. They find out that their powers have no affect on each other, and they face off in an epic fight.
good start so far Ben. You might want to add some more detail to the Goal section of your pitch. This will add detail and make your pitch stronger. You could also develop the conflict section too.
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